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~Even though I really love you
I'll gonna smile because I deserve to
and it will get better in time
~

Leona Lewis, "Better in Time"

If you have not heard this song, Go forth and Youtube it.

I've heard this song a bunch of times before, but I was listening to it last night and it just...hit me. Thus this was born, and I REALLY wish I knew how to upload things with layers without them becoming pixelated.

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:iconcowqueen3:
This looks really good. Just a couple things: her arms look kinda like those blow up dolls, where you bend them, and the sides don't bend anywhere but that one place, so the two sides almost come together at the bend? Weird elbows..... And the far forearm looks a bit long, maybe it's just me

Also you have black lines, and this would look so much prettier if you just had the colors(you can make it work for the hair of you make the inside of the back hair around her head a bit darker than the front strands, instead of just directly behind the front strands). And, of course, she has no shading around the eyes to make them stick out of her face. Try making her eyebrows a tad thicker, and the skin below them a tiny bit darker?

But yeah, very pretty, really fits with the song ^.^ I love the texture on the hair, and the flower pedals :D
:iconwhitetigerdemoness:
Thanks <3

>_>; I sadly haven't gotten the hang of anatomy yet, but I'll keep trying! *agrees that the forearms are a tad to long*

Actualy, I can make it have just color. I'll be uploading that version to my scraps. There is shading around her eyes, but I guess it's to light to see. Every time I tried to go darker with the shading (anywhere really) she just looked dirty instead of shaded. Tips?

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:icondarkangelj6:
So THIS is where you have been!
Doesn't look pixley at all when I make it bigger O_o
<--is missing something?
And the hair looks....weird...like one part just has like a hole or something and is just one big ass blob or something...hrm...I dunno but I like the colors the inspiration is just a Miriah Carry Wannabe (Can't spell sue me)

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Belves? Orcs? Trolls? Undead? COWS?!?!
Now -that's- what I'm talkin' 'bout!

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:iconwhitetigerdemoness:
....mew? Your comment on the hair confuses me D:

Personally, I don't care who the artist of a song is. It's the SONG that really matters. People who won't listen to certain music just because they don't like someone they've never met before makes me UNamused. (shocking! Something that doesn't amuse Sennef D: )

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:iconcowqueen3:
Maybe make the eyes a little smaller, so it's conceivable that the eyebrows actually_could_cast a shadow over them? I do like most of the shading that is there on this one, though.

And Dark Angel's crazy; her hair rocks. Not realistic at all, but it looks exactly like the hair in the claymation sort of things? Like the Corpse Bride or something. Not meant to be realistic so much as expressive.
:iconwhitetigerdemoness:
*wriggles* I'm glad the hair is expressive. And I talked to Darkangel (we play WoW together) She was confused as to why there was indication that the hair folded behind instead of just one solid piece.

Smaller eyes? I'll see what I can do in future pieces. I do have a problem with eye size, I can never seem to get them just right.

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